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PostSubject: Legend of Maldana (NOT WoW, this is my own fantasy univurse)   Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:11 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Legend of Maldana (NOT WoW, this is my own fantasy univurse)   Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Legend of Maldana (NOT WoW, this is my own fantasy univurse)   Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Legend of Maldana (NOT WoW, this is my own fantasy univurse)   Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:13 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Legend of Maldana (NOT WoW, this is my own fantasy univurse)   Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:14 pm

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PostSubject: Awesome!   Fri Apr 15, 2011 10:55 pm

I'll be having a read tonight!
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PostSubject: Cool!   Mon Apr 25, 2011 3:48 am

Appart from some Major grammar errors, this was AMAZING! I would buy this, I really would.

Now, the only thing I have to say that's constructive, is this:

It needed more "Explanation" in some parts, like in Chapter 1 where the elves were meeting up, it said "...around the Big table" instead of maybe using "Around the large, wooden table"

Still, a majorly interesting read and I hope I get some more of this from you Very Happy

(I was actually expecting Henry to rape that kid in his barracks o.O)
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PostSubject: Thanks   Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:17 am

For once I hear some criticism, hehe.

Thank you alot and I'm glad you like it.

This is not an excuse, but I would be surprised if the first 1-2 chapters wouldn't be as good. Fun detail is, I wrote those two about three years ago, while 3-4 were written last year.

I will keep the detail part in mind and I really do need to check my grammar.

(Actualy when I wrote the first chapter, it was partly RPed with the former owner of the character Salid. I think I would have written it this year, that event in the barracks might had been darker; probebly not rape but more violent.)
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